Storyboard for our PuppetpoemFilm

By looking at the book 'The Storyboard Design Course' By Giuseppe Cristiano I've been attempting to make my storyboarding more fluent and, in general, better, by using reference images and taken into account 'balanced compositions' etc. 


The following storyboard is for our first film in response to a poem. It hopefully gives us the general idea of how we want the footage to be and the edit to flow, but leaves room for things that could occur on set. e.g - new shot ideas etc.


The concept is, in short, of a girl feeling pressured to be a certain type cast - or like people want her to be - so feels like a puppet, pulled around on strings, until she breaks free. This is inspired by lines in the poem we were given such as:
 This is who you are
 Everybody pulling in different directions
 This is who you should be
 I am no ones puppet.
Lines such as this and others will be used in the 'dream like' sequence - ('frame' 14 onwards) and will be added later, either spoken or in text later in post.